I'm not sure in what context you consider it to be bad Dave?
It's the clearest statement of intent, and actual commitment to Everton I have seen. I am perfectly at ease with how it is structured and what the consequences of the deal will be.
I am sure Mr Moshiri will be communicating with us all the moment the transaction is ratified by the Premier League.
I suspect the club were forced into making the announcement on the back of the press speculation which was probably not planned. It may well have been their intent that the deal would be ratified before publication, thus allowing for a fuller explanation.